The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesn’t give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters I’m surprised it’s minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.
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