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NyubliaLv154yr
2020-02-06 18:16

I am disappointed. I couldn’t even read more than 4 chapters. The plot seems quite interesting, but the writing is so horrible that I'm completely confused. Author, please get an editor

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Take_the_Moon
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That's true. Maybe one day. I'm so sorry.

Nyublia
NyubliaLv15

I am wiling to edit your chapters for free if you are also interested.

Take_the_Moon:That's true. Maybe one day. I'm so sorry.
Take_the_Moon
Take_the_MoonAuthor

I'm interest in your propose. Talk to me in Discord. Take_the_Moon#9687.

Nyublia:I am wiling to edit your chapters for free if you are also interested.
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