Review Detail of redmitte2x in Marie

Story is great, I especially appreciate the MC as she is both charming and cunning at the same time. World is pretty immersive too. I like how you indoctrinate the concept of historical events which makes it even more realistic despite the supernatural concepts that accompanies within. Grammar-wise, yeah could use a lot of improvement, a mishap of punctuation every now and then. Overall, I can say that it is a refreshing read and got me hook up quite a bit. Keep up the good work and keep improving!!!