The author has a good imagination, but the inconsistency in grammar had dulled it a little. But nevertheless it's still a good novel to read I think, and when that little girl asked I belong to that country ( origin ) but adopted into an another country, it was a new concept, so good keep going. Hope to see many more chapters in the future.
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