Review Detail of CouchSurfingDragon in Marie

The story seems to be about a powerful nightmare loli about to go to kindergarten. There are many, many concepts in this novel, names of gods, important events, family circumstances, abilities, and powers at play. The complexity provides potential, but I had to backtrack, to be certain I was reading correctly. The action is very good, but is sometimes difficult to understand because of your English grammar. The lead heroine is 4 years old and terrifies me with the way she speaks, which I think may be intentional. I wouldn't want to meet this loli with anything short of a heavy machine gun for her face and a pistol for myself, in the inevitable case that the machine gun doesn't work. GREAT WORK, AUTHOR!