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Azure04pearl
Azure04pearlLv34yr
2020-05-20 19:51

I can't remember the last time my heart entered a story. It felt so real, not like the cheesy books I've read so far. It's unique, very few people write Muslim stories. Feels good to read something different.

Unbreak Me

Imaan00
4.6
74 Chs

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thecoolgal
thecoolgalLv1

Amazing story! Can’t wait for more💖💖 The plot is so interesting and the CHARACTERS! OmG, I love Zayn! Keep going, author. I’m patiently waiting for more!😊

5yr

aca_ira
aca_iraLv3

Assalamualaikum....Sis Imaan, I really love this story but it was too long to wait the new chapter..... However, I will support your novel Love it!( ◜‿◝ )♡

4yr
yizreel_jez
yizreel_jezLv3

Great start, plot, and quality of writing. Rate: 4.8 here's why, Writing quality: 5/5, well, nothing to say about it, I love the prose! the descriptive writing for me is great!. Stability of updates: 5/5, I assume with the 70 chapters the author is updating his/her story every day Story Development: 4/5 as far as I read 10 chapters, I slowly am loving the plot, why 4? well, I would have give this 5 if I read more chapters, I just want to review so that the author would know that he is doing well. Character Design: 5/5, Love the characters, they're so lively and lovable at the same time. World Background: No words left for me to say but I gave it 5/5. Continue writing author!

4yr
NotUse
NotUseLv4

This for the review swap. The novel has a good plot, I'd definitely recommend it to all readers which are a fan of the romance genre. The novel has unique chapter titles, and the plot isn't boring. There are no misspelled words, and the writing quality is good. As for story development, things seem to have a perfect pace. I have no complaints when it comes to the characters of the story, they are unique and well described.

4yr
cheesewheeze
cheesewheezeLv3

I think the story has a great start. The story is also interesting. The author has executed the character description and the world background amazingly! Keep it up! Do not be discourage. Writing every day is a good practice.

4yr
EmojiGirl
EmojiGirlLv1

This story has been a little akward but I have loved it so far .. I can't wait to see what will happen next after what he discovered ..I pity the guy I hope they will be less heartbreaks 💔 . As I said I can't wait😊

4yr
Bimbss_dee9
Bimbss_dee9Lv1

This book is interesting and it is very thrilling I love this book so much😍❤️ You make a very good author Continue the good work 👍 I love Zayn's character and the way the characters are described in the story.

4yr
mujahyda
mujahydaLv2

What a great story, an absolutely wonderful read. I love how the story of the main characters' progresses. The content's quite good. Highly recommend it! <3

4yr
sexygirl_03
sexygirl_03Lv1

Reveal spoiler

5yr
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