This story was a very hard read. Not because of the characters but the grammar , spelling and punctuation mistakes are terrible (perhaps Google translate?) . I really couldn't read anymore. That being said, it is quite promising although I couldn't follow the characters very well. It's a jumble. I suggest you get someone to edit it again and I will definitely give it another shot. Cheers
RoyaleGates
Liked it!
LIKEI did have someone to edit but she stopped I already have a new version with better content and it’s hard to find someone to edit especially during this moment which is crazy and hard to realize it’s real life. I’m slowly getting my book to have better grammar so it all won’t be glitched out but I’ll take my hours for me to get a chapter done and look up new words to explore. I promise I’ll make this book not glitched but it will take an hour
zodiackhufv:Alright. Just take your time and get it done at your own pace. Don't feel rushed. I will be waiting ☺️☺️