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This is a good story but needs grammar and word use editing. Plus where are the photos mentioned in the text and why does the POV keep changing when it's Rudy's life that is the main focus of the novel.

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The photos I use are form Pinterest and we heart it they are all on wattpad. I change the POV because I want to know how my other characters are feeling when the drama is there and I keep on making my other characters disappear and not mentioned. There’s going to be a new version of this book with better grammer with help of a friend I’m still trying to use big words like everyone else in books