Review Detail of missymirei in Olivia Sparks

No ****. Both the flow and writing style are really good (grammar included), but sometimes I get lost in the plotline since I feel that the development is really fast! One moment Olivia's engaged, then another moment it's cancelled engagement, returns to Country P, then hooks with Max. However, I love how the characters stick to their personalities though I'm still confused between the other character's attitude and my own prejudice about their behavior. For example, Oliver's wife, his father, then Olivia and Max himself. I was thinking that what if Ollie's wife is a white lotus and that she's only using him, how his father is a real b^tch, and why did Olivia still allowed that Go guy to touch her despite knowing he was cheating, why did she hook up with Max so fast (though I read it was part of her plan? no offense I'd definitely thrash the Go guy too but her hook up with Max, a playboy, is too fast imo). Perhaps, since we are only in a few chapters, a lot of character development is still ongoing (looking forward to it) but I really hope author-sama writes more description about their individual characters through the paragraphs so that readers can feel and relate more to their personalities. I'm excited to know Olivia's motivation against Selena (that foreshadowing about how a lost life was because of her). Also, I still don't understand the world she's in, how it works, the power struggle and her background (perhaps it would be introduced in later chapters but reading the chapters now (15+?) is confusing. The little bun is a plus, and the references from PH like 'pangit', and 'ito ang tama' are good spices (shoutout to my kababayans haha). Perhaps I'm just used to reading chinese translations and their writing style that's why I'm not used to this writing style and I tend to overthink the plot (sorry can't help it huhu). I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Kudos to you author! 💕