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2019-12-17 02:11

You know that a story is potentially good if it manages to capture your attention and interest in the first chapter - it did for me. And subsequent chapters didn't disappoint. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds! This review is given as of chapter 4. Writing quality: Sound grammar and clear writing. This author helps to edit for other novels too so you can be sure her language is on point. Updating stability: It's not stable for now but this author is trying her best to write new content for her readers. Let's be patient! Story development: I love the opening chapter! So much drama! And then the author brought us back to the past to explain how things led up to what we read in Ch1. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops. Character design: So far we have only been introduced to the female lead named Olivia, and she is such a sassy character. I love her personality! It makes me wonder what the male lead will be like, will he be able to keep up with the intelligent and fearless Olivia? World background: It's still early and I can't say much about this but based on what I've read so far, I'm sure this author will build up the world background nicely. This novel has potential to be a great one! Try it! ✌️

Olivia Sparks

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4.8
297 Chs

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This novel is really good 👍👍👍, my ex would be damned if you won't get hooked after reading the 1st 5 chapters😉😉😉. The story revolves around a playboy prince and an outcast heiress, if you think it's another typical lovestory here in WN i dare you to read this one first. The narration of the story is fast paced and though this is purely fictional the approach is very much realistic. The author sure knows how to write and doesn't treat her readers as idiots. That being said you won't find any situatiions like the FL being betrayed by her bestfriend while fucking her ex.... or scenes like exposing things online to dirty someones's image to sway the public opinion on things that are utterly rubbish. I highly recommend this story to fellow intelligent readers🤓🤓🤓 who are tired of reading rehashed, recycled, butchered novels here in WN.🤓🤓🤓🤓 Most importantly this novel is still FREE author san is still very generous up to this point for not putting this novel on premium. If you are SMART you'll have 👄 Olivia Sparks 👠 in your library 😎😎😎

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ElizaA
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet, it's one of my absolute favorites! 1. FL'S CHARACTER. FL is independent, smart and scheming while still oozing with class. She doesn't have the vibe most other scheming FLs in other novels have (one track mind, out to get revenge & revenge only, romance comes second, but in the end saved by ML). No, our Livi darling has a well built background and personality. She's not all about revenge and knows when to back off & live happily with friends/family. 1.5 And let me just mention, no filler characters. All the main characters/friends have solid personalities and world building. It's not like FL+ML+background characters. They feel so real and their interactions are so legit. 2. THE ROMANCE. They have a healthy relationship and she's definitely not a damsel. He follows her like a lil puppy and their interactions are SO CUTE. He loves her. She loves him. She's NOT and unfeeling ice cube and it's NOT one sided love. All the fluff and steamy moments, oof I'm here for it. 3. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!!! FL starts off the whole story getting cheated on and doesn't magically recover from trauma. We grow with her. And while you just want things to go perfect, she shows that she's HUMAN. Anyways, ML totally dotes on her and they communicate and it's great. 4. OP COUPLE. I mean, you put the two together & they can practically take over the world. I love how they're independently strong and yet they're even stronger together. FL doesn't rely on ML (and his status). It's so nice having 2 equally strong characters (not like the other novels where the CEO is secretly doing like half the work). Anyways, love this novel. You're really missing out if you don't read it!!

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This is a great novel that is addicting to read. The story oozes with lust, power, and suspense. The novel is well written and compelling because of the fantastical modern dynamics of the characters.

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I love how the story unfolds. The cliffhangers keeping you on your toes. I just can't contain my excitement waiting what will happen next. I have read a lot of stories in this platform but this is by far my most favorite. The author have put in tremendous effort in making sure that each releases would get the readers attention and make a mental note on who are the characters on this story. The best part of this novel is that you can read it within your budget. I really appreciate the author for her excellent work and for making it affordable for all the readers.

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An all encompassing story in which MC and ML equally share their own flaws. Through the steady progress of their relationship the two are reflecting upon them and bettering themselves, albeit slowly. More so being apparent as of now in the case of the ML who was a playboy and has found love in the form of Olivia who’s managed to leash in previously immoderate prince and in no time I see him becoming a wife slave without a doubt. Plot wise, events are progressing at a relatively well pace and there’s never really a dull moment. Not a day where I’m left not wanting to read more either due to suspense, curiosity or simply being greedy for more content.

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I am shook. I love this novel! The grammar is on point, the plot is interesting and the fl is badass. There isn't a 'virginity' cliche on this novel for both the fl and the ml and I admire that progressive mindset dear author! Keep up the good work :DD

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Gwenivea
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Overall I like this book. Olivia is sassy, my fave so far. I like where this is going, honestly I think this author does know how to ride. This is exciting and fun to read and I like the comedy aspect of it all

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