Item: Olivia Sparks
Rating: 5
Author: Swaning

SwaningModerator5yr

2019-12-17 02:11

You know that a story is potentially good if it manages to capture your attention and interest in the first chapter - it did for me. And subsequent chapters didn't disappoint. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds! This review is given as of chapter 4. Writing quality: Sound grammar and clear writing. This author helps to edit for other novels too so you can be sure her language is on point. Updating stability: It's not stable for now but this author is trying her best to write new content for her readers. Let's be patient! Story development: I love the opening chapter! So much drama! And then the author brought us back to the past to explain how things led up to what we read in Ch1. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops. Character design: So far we have only been introduced to the female lead named Olivia, and she is such a sassy character. I love her personality! It makes me wonder what the male lead will be like, will he be able to keep up with the intelligent and fearless Olivia? World background: It's still early and I can't say much about this but based on what I've read so far, I'm sure this author will build up the world background nicely. This novel has potential to be a great one! Try it! ✌️

Olivia Sparks

filledelisle

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297 Chs

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