Review Detail of AzureWolf in I’ve became an Overmind in Star Wars?? (Dropped-up for adoption)

I went into this expecting a real zerg and star wars cross over story. What I got was a human which in any shape or form does not resemble what a zerg is. The author does not know what the zerg really are. I dropped this when I hit ch. 3 due to the fact that zerg is just a word that author used and is not fully utilized to its potential in this story. It is just a Human in possession of dark side powers that has the overmind title with a random personality that is all over the place. I don't expect this story to get far. don't get me started on the MC interactions with the females. I understand that this is the first time the author wrote a story, but, not reading what you wrote and judging it as a fan of the of the zerg and star wars is not how your write a good crossover story. If you love these titles then do it justice not ruin it.