Why does the main female character have to be so stupid to the extreme? It's almost like the authir hates women by the way she's portrayed as a mindless dimwit with no regards at all as to how embarrassing she is to the men she claims to like. It's so over the top ridiculous. I only keep reading in hopes she'll get a clue and actually learn some self dignity and restraint. The editing is not very good. Typos, inconsistent story lines, and getting character names wrong throughout the chapters so far. 70 some chapters in and still no background on just WHY the Mus and the Luos hate each other. Just a lot of hate and childishness from most all of the characters. I can't root for the main relationship yet because I feel totally sorry for the main male lead, the only character I'm liking, so fat.
A Bit of Mountains and Rivers
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