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Review Detail of anon88 in Hidden Marriage 99 Days: Please Restrain Yourself

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anon88
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This is a review of the first forty chapters. The female lead (Li Beinian) is a typical good girl who was wronged and then reborn with a thirst for revenge and the dream of becoming an A-List actress. Unlike some lead characters, she doesn’t know all of the people who hurt her or at least the extent of their actions that culminated with her and her children’s death. She begins by cooperating with the male lead (Mu Xichen) to thwart her evil stepsister’s plan to humiliate her. Along with the evil stepsister are the usual suspects: self centered capitalist father, evil stepmother, and childhood fiancé who is in love with an evil woman. The face slapping begins a few minutes after her rebirth with Niannian verbally attacked her newly found birth family. The final boss villains ( Mu Donglin and Kerou) have barely been mentioned by this point in the story. Overall, the story is predictable and is starting to get slow paced. In general, there are no glaring grammar errors and transitions between scenes are well done. While the story is smooth to read, filler chapters have already started to pop-up. I expect even more filler chapters to appear as this is a 1,000+ chapter story. The only other complaint I have with this novel is that the characters are one dimensional or schizophrenic. The stepsister/stepmother pair are 1 dimensional. The female lead’s character is inconsistent. From how she describes herself in her first life she went from a tough high EQ tomboy martial arts wiz to a quiet naive push over after being reunited with her birth family at 19 years of age. After her rebirth, Niannian becomes a sarcastic loner she-devil. The characters change would make more sense if the female lead had transmigrated instead. If you are willing to invest a lot of time into a face slapping rebirth story.....this story will satisfy your cravings.

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Hidden Marriage 99 Days: Please Restrain Yourself

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prathiii
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okay then in this life she is going to marry mu xichen?????

anon88
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It looks like it’s heading in that direction by volume 3.

prathiii:okay then in this life she is going to marry mu xichen?????
Asliza_Mohd
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Thanks for your honest review will think about this story then so not to waste my coins .