Item: Not Good! The Villainess is Muddled
Rating: 4.8
Author: melo_marl

melo_marlAuthor5yr

2019-12-14 11:20

A message to readers: This is a character-driven story so don't expect major attention to the world background. I did put some thought into it but it's not intricate. I'm more comfortable writing character-driven stories so I'm not saying sorry for not putting much into the world bg. Anyways, this is really an ******* work. There may be typos and grammatical errors but I kept them to a minimum. The errors you'll see probably escaped my eyes as I was proofreading this. Criticism is accepted but not the overly hater-like comments. That's totally discouraging to writers so watch what you type, not just here but anywhere in the internet. You don't know how powerful words are. Hoping you'll enjoy this humble work, peace! **. Hi to my Filipino readers <333 ~M. Marl

Not Good! The Villainess is Muddled

melo_marl

4.9

1 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies13

melo_marlAuthor

The series of asterisk is am.ateur. Dang webnovel for banning that word lol

5yr

Rita_FeliciaLv1

Hello melo marl

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Rita_FeliciaLv1

Hope the series is nice

5yr

Rita_FeliciaLv1

Are you there, the you see my Text

Rita_Felicia:Hope the series is nice

5yr

Rita_FeliciaLv1

I don't know if we can talk on hangout. Because i really don't understand this site i was introduced by a friend .

5yr

Rita_FeliciaLv1

[email protected]

5yr

Rita_FeliciaLv1

Nice

5yr

xaynnnLv4

Filipino here 👋 you know your novel and the way you written it was well enough. Excuse me for the comparison but I recently read a novel with also an amateur author (that many praises well tho have many grammatical errors, awkward sentence constructions and some said they cried at the first few chap, really I cant help it but feel contempt) but yours was more written greatly that I even mistook you for a foreign writer 😄 I love this novel and the ml, thank you for making him the way he is *kowtows*

5yr

melo_marlAuthor

Thank you for your comment. Tho I'm really curious about the novel you're talking about hehehe but I won't ask na lang lmao I heart you~

xaynnn:Filipino here 👋 you know your novel and the way you written it was well enough. Excuse me for the comparison but I recently read a novel with also an amateur author (that many praises well tho have many grammatical errors, awkward sentence constructions and some said they cried at the first few chap, really I cant help it but feel contempt) but yours was more written greatly that I even mistook you for a foreign writer 😄 I love this novel and the ml, thank you for making him the way he is *kowtows*

5yr

YulongYuXianTaiyinLv6

I'm wondering where your story went ? There is only the Foreword available here

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Hihi_No4Lv4

Hi :) the author's story is on Wattpad

YulongYuXianTaiyin:I'm wondering where your story went ? There is only the Foreword available here

2yr

YulongYuXianTaiyinLv6

Thanks

Hihi_No4:Hi :) the author's story is on Wattpad

2yr

melo_marlAuthor

Hello, it's available only in wattpad as of the moment

YulongYuXianTaiyin:I'm wondering where your story went ? There is only the Foreword available here

2yr

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