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Jaytee786
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Only got about 10chapters in before I decided to drop it. Writing: Sucks, as everything seems pretty rushed and nondescript. Doesn't really describe characters or specifics, and thereby comes across as more of a generally summary as to how MC goes from 0 to a Gary Stu. Development: Pretty much rushed, due to timeskips all over the place. MC goes from being 2 to 5, then teenage, and all we really glean in the story is topics he's trained or a company he's founded. Even after jumping into Aincrad, there's no real character or game breakdown. He basically just enters and solos or masters everything with AI assistance, and the only thing described in depth was a few boss fights, if that. All in all, if you can ignore the typos or writing quality, you might enjoy the novel since it's a decent wish-fulfillment OP MC kinda story.

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Jaytee786
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CalciumLurcher
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in my experience, most books that have dilogue like: John: hello are trash, but there are some exceptions.