Review Detail of Oydjayvagr in Demoness's Concept Of Justice

Overall it's pretty interesting. Obviously It's too soon to give a decent evaluation of the story, since at the moment there are only 9 chapters, but so far it's engaging and the main character is quite interesting. The writing isn't perfect, but I already noticed some improvement, which is more than promising. Also the chapters are long enough to be satisfactory :) I look forward to the future of this story.