Writing Quality: 4.0 - It's good, but it's not special. There's nothing particularly unique about this writing. However, I feel that it's clear and easy to read. Stability of Updates: 5.0 - After looking at the dates on which the chapters were published, I have to say the stability of updates is pretty good. Story Development: 4.5 - The story fits together and it's easy to comprehend. It gives me a sense of satisfaction in particular when a story fits together. However, once again there's nothing special about the story development(so far). Character Design: 4.5 - Good characters. I like emotions were mentioned. Unfortunately, the reader doesn't resonate with the protagonist. The pain is mentioned, but it isn't described. The embarrassment/shyness is mentioned, but it isn't described. All the emotions are like that. They're mentioned, not described. I really appreciate a heart bleeding story where the reader is dragged along with the main character until they suddenly realize the story is over. Despite my wishes, I obviously wouldn't expect that of everyone - hence the 4.5. World Background: 5.0 - One of the things I appreciated about this is that the architecture in Paris was mentioned and related to the storyline. I am really satisfied with the world background! Take all my reviews and complaints with a grain of salt - or a large jar of salt. These are comments unique to me, so obviously someone else might think differently! Keep in mind, reading is a different experience for everyone. So, I encourage you all to at least read the first few chapters before deciding. Thanks, Mnerenuk
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