So far so good. The story is progressing really well — no dilly-dallying at all. Female MC is strong, skillful, and devilish. (Which I like, since I personally have a grudge over damsels in distress). Writing is good, although I suggest putting more details would help the readers visualize the preceding events. Overall, it has a good plotline, and dynamic characters. Well done! 👍
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