Review Detail of Condemned in Trash in the Apocalypse

Hello this is Condemned, a fellow citizen from the Philippines and author of the book "The Black Market". Anyway, I will provide a few feedbacks for this book. First of all, the premise has potential and I can really imagine what was happening inside the story with your vivid descriptions. But here's a few things you need to work on with. You don't have problems with grammar, perhaps. But your usage of punctuation marks had a few mistakes and also there are a few incomplete sentences which makes the readers a bit confused. Also, the characters lack a bit of emotion. Yes you vivisly described them (What they did. Who they were and yada yada), but they lack the so called "soul". They are like fleeting characters on a script. But i like the premise. And it is possible for this to go on hit if you post more chapters and some unpredictable events. Good luck daoist brother from the Philippines