If you add some new characters will be good.And what do you think about the mc learning with the 4th hokage the hiraishin no jutsu.Another thing it's about the mc's kekkei genkai, why he didn't use that?
He will use his at the finals of the Chunnin exam. I did added some like lluvia, Kokolate and her sister. Unless you want more.....I don't know what to say.