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Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv54yr
2020-05-31 11:01

No me había dado cuenta que no había dejado una reseña. Mal de mi parte. Me pregunto, por que no hay muchos fanfic de esta novela. El MC Original era un dolor en los bajos. Y un MC que lo reemplace sería genial, o en este caso, su hermano. Lo único que me molesta, es lo lento que bajan capítulos. Pero lo demás, recomendado.

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jeanpierregerardo
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Author, if you read my comment, consider also: -Eris Greyrat. -Sylphiette Greyrat. -Aisha Greyrat. -Ariel Anemoi Asura. etc. ..............

5yr

Roxy_Greyrat21
Roxy_Greyrat21Author

Author here...... Hope you enjoy.....................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
The_Hacker
The_HackerLv1

Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks.

5yr
Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Me gusta lo que has hecho, y también estoy de-acuerno en que hay muchas cosas de la novela original que no me gustaron, principalmente el MC que parecía un niño malcriado, pero de los estúpidos no adorable. Seria bueno que no limites la cantidad de Mana que posee o almeno del nivel de su hermano y solo sea el nivel de la magia que puede lanzar, que seria el intermedio era?. Seria como no poder disparar una Bazuca pero tener Mágnum con disparos casi ilimitados. me ago entender? . . Ps: Agrega a la rubia elfa, Has de ella tu sirvienta o lo que demandes, me dejo un mal sabor de boca cuando no le iso nada. Al igual que con la sexy morena gata del parche en el ojo. Seguí así.

5yr
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGLv6

Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks. I am copy the other Man in the Works. But is my feel about the story.

5yr
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGLv6

the refresh rate is very slow. I'm not complaining. this is really the only bad point I think. i hope you keep up the good work. thanks for the chapter.

5yr
Haku_Cianci
Haku_CianciLv4

Please next 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙇🙇i like this story, membaca saat sedang santai menenangkan, perkembangannya tidak terlalu mengejar kekuatan seperti dicerita lainnya, i like this 😍😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰🥰😍😍🥰🥰😍

5yr
otankay
otankayLv11

la lei solo porque habia buenasreseñas, es faltal, los capitulos solo se sentran en los primeros del anime, imagina ver el anime con un personaje extra nada relevante ni importante. asi es esto. es una perdida de tiempo

1yr
Vontrujillo
VontrujilloLv1

Me gusta el personaje creado para este fanfic pese a que el propia autor resalta que su protagonista tiene problemas de personalidad este se siente mas vivo mas humano a diferencia de otros que se siente como cascarones vacíos que pueden hacer todo y resolver los problemas con el mínimo esfuerzo por eso este me gusta

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