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ArgosYesu
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Dropped because of how annoying it is to read about a manly manchild. A ‘seasoned’ warrior and renowned butcher yet the first war arc shown has him with barely adequete knowledge of command and childish actions during combat. He’s a member of the fucking Royal Guard yet 90% of problems during battle is because he is shit at pacing himself and always ends up too exhausted to continue. Them there is the nerf where MC suddenly ignored his earlier “epiphany” about his rashness during battle and decides he isn’t rash but that something else is to blame resulting in a stupid loss of rather important memories and future growth. Just very annoying to read.

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Somenonebody
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Eh, a below-average writer here in case you missed the synopsis, it's not the mc that's terrible at pacing, it's me the author... And as for the man child part, that's my attempt at giving him more of a personality since people thought my last story didn't have much of one... And I already explained the memory situation to another, to sum it up, he didn't lose anything that would limit his growth, so he was not nerfed in any way. Thanks for the review, and thanks for giving it a shot. I know I still have much to work on, hopefully, I can get better, but yeah I don't blame you for dropping because I doubt I will.

Inferno_Vor
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For personality you don't have to force flaws, as long as someone grows they will usually pass by their flaws or minimize them, as long as they realize them. Just adding quirks is enough, like playful, overly-honest, outspoken, introverted... There are a lot that are kinda flaws but not glaring ones children and teens have...

Somenonebody:Eh, a below-average writer here in case you missed the synopsis, it's not the mc that's terrible at pacing, it's me the author... And as for the man child part, that's my attempt at giving him more of a personality since people thought my last story didn't have much of one... And I already explained the memory situation to another, to sum it up, he didn't lose anything that would limit his growth, so he was not nerfed in any way. Thanks for the review, and thanks for giving it a shot. I know I still have much to work on, hopefully, I can get better, but yeah I don't blame you for dropping because I doubt I will.