Review Detail of unwantedlove1216 in Reincarnated As Liam Evans

Item: Reincarnated As Liam Evans
Rating: 1.2

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It has 2 short chapters that don't give much info other than their male and killed by a girl he rejected. it could use better grammer and longer chapter. The mc meeting god is a bit cliché. I hope that the author improves. I'm looking forward to who you pair the mc with and what family their born.

Reincarnated As Liam Evans

Meredith_Grey

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Meredith_GreyAuthorMeredith_Grey

@unwantedlove I completely agree with you. I wrote this story for fun and because I had nothing to do. I am rewriting this story and doing it more seriously and I hope you’ll enjoy it and give me comments on what to do better![img=recommend]

3yr

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is it rewritten yet? :)

Meredith_Grey:@unwantedlove I completely agree with you. I wrote this story for fun and because I had nothing to do. I am rewriting this story and doing it more seriously and I hope you’ll enjoy it and give me comments on what to do better![img=recommend]

1yr