Review Detail of lulu_ahmed in The Twisted Two: the feisty and the docile

I actually like this story a lot and the only think I dislike about it, is the stupid setup of character of the docile twin a better story could have been made off her but the author chose to make her an amusement for the other characters It would have been better if she was 9 years old or something because her character has a brain and commonsense worse then that of a 9 year old. rather than focusing on the main lead and making them perfect and stuff making this story one where each character gets their development would have been enough and better in by opinion