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anjefos
anjefosLv45yr
2019-12-22 08:31

Estou gostando bastante, sei que está no inicio, mas espero ver momentos épicos atrelados ao desenvolvimento do personagem. Coisas como uma ponta solta, que depois de dezenas de capítulos depois, gere uma dor de cabeça que até mesmo nosso herói tenha dificuldades para resolver. Claro nada jogado, tem que ser bem trabalho e trazer novos questionamentos e informações. Acharia fod# se comedor de merda e seu mestre se unissem de alguma forma com os Deuses, fazendo Júlio não ficar tão confortável como está agora.

Master of Legends

Lich_God
4.7
64 Chs

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Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards. He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting. I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons", and suddenly regressing cultivation because he went and punched his grimoire (which is something he shouldn't have done with his mental age), it's disappointing. If those things are made for the sake of "comedic effect" then it failed badly, it's not funny at all, and the built premise in early chapters are just falling apart instead. Grammatical errors are everywhere, sometimes the MC is referred to by "he", and suddenly becoming "you", or something similar. It also happens with the females, being referred to as "her" sometimes then "him" other times. The events seem like they are written on the fly. Things happen out of nowhere without any hints, making the narrative suffer. One example is the appearance of his master, only being said that the MC felt his presence days before when the guy already appeared in front of him. The characters are bland. The female characters follow common templates, but the execution is lacking, their characters aren't built from the ground up, you get the end results via timeskips. The "bad guys" are mostly, if not all "arrogant young master" template, no depth in personality whatsoever, only either obnoxiously loud, or h*rny b*st*rds.

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