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Hello guys, I am the author of the work and of course, I am obliged to give 5 Stars because the work and me (-_-). I have been thanking you in advance for any support you are giving me and if possible leave comments, even if they are insults about my horrible writing, senseless dialogues and so on, I am completely open to such things and I really want you to say such things, so that I can improve in the future. And about the release of chapters, I'll try to keep an average of 4~7 Chapters per week, so don't forget to comment and donate some pebbles to Lich here, it always encourages content creators like me.

I really want to thank all of you readers for the support you are giving my story, this makes me very happy! NOW TOWARDS THE 100K OF VIEWS!!!!

Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

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Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards. He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting. I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons", and suddenly regressing cultivation because he went and punched his grimoire (which is something he shouldn't have done with his mental age), it's disappointing. If those things are made for the sake of "comedic effect" then it failed badly, it's not funny at all, and the built premise in early chapters are just falling apart instead. Grammatical errors are everywhere, sometimes the MC is referred to by "he", and suddenly becoming "you", or something similar. It also happens with the females, being referred to as "her" sometimes then "him" other times. The events seem like they are written on the fly. Things happen out of nowhere without any hints, making the narrative suffer. One example is the appearance of his master, only being said that the MC felt his presence days before when the guy already appeared in front of him. The characters are bland. The female characters follow common templates, but the execution is lacking, their characters aren't built from the ground up, you get the end results via timeskips. The "bad guys" are mostly, if not all "arrogant young master" template, no depth in personality whatsoever, only either obnoxiously loud, or h*rny b*st*rds.

I love the story, and it has a very good concept behind it, but stories where the mc gets dominated by his wife is not for me. I get that he would do anything for them but to me you can love your girl but still wear the pants in the household.

Conheço o esqueleto que escreveu está novel. Apesar de tudo é uma pessoa boa, mas nem tanto, apenas tomem cuidado, goblins não são nada confiáveis, fiquem longe... Foi o dia mais triste da minha vida... O dia em que li uma novel, estava inocentemente no Spirit... Eu sei, o primeiro erro foi entrar no Spirit, mas...

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Good history, light and interesting. The writer is a lich then he never die and can write forever it is the best point. The main character is really great and smart, he had a sad past but now he can enjoy a new life. 👻