I really like the overall concept. The grammar and flow of some chapters can be hard to follow sometimes, meaning you’re not sure who is talking. Also there are times where it seems pure gibberish with cut up dialogue, but that might be due to the ghost the main character gets from a skill. Especially confusing when he meets up with the guy he got that skill from who still has the same ghost from that skill.
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