The story is just a ferries wheel. Sometimes on top sometimes below. Sometimes stop and go turn around. Can we try to just go in straight path sometimes with obstacles for a while and then go into a clear hi-way for a better and comfort travel? Can the author give us enjoyment while reading? Please do some drastic changes just a little bit. Thank you and have a good day!
JaycelleRodriguez
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