I really enjoy the story, even though it's a little forced and progressing a little to fast. I hope you don't give up on it and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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LIKEKinda trying to do slice of life, but my adhd won’t let me... needs action, but my laziness won’t let me type out a fight scene.. this is what we get... I think it’s alright, could use more world building but haven’t come up with a plan for my world yet... I should honestly draw my self a map but I can’t draw.