Review Detail of Alpha_Medic in Alexithymia: The Curse of Transcendence [Remastered]

I'll admit, there were several times I was confused during the first few chapters. The constant pacing shift didn't help either. Though, once I was able to reread it a few times, the story itself is amazing! I would recommend finding a singular pacing structure to follow, including predicates and dialogue structure. Other than that, you have a unique and enthralling idea, please keep up with it!