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Truly a hidden gem. The only negative is that most chapters have a lot of grammatical negatives (there are some good one though) --- Not that i mind much.

It's a very good story and since I'm following and giving stones of power Follow the story friend and do not leave it half as other people seriously, while you go up more chapters, you will see how more people are going to join to read this novel, because it is starting well, good still like this successes and wait for the next cap xD more chapterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

It is a pretty good story :) Some things could be better, but I don't think that takes away from the story. It had moments that were interesting, but it did have moments that took me a while to finish, and did feel like a bit off to me. All in all though it is still really good, and I hope to see more of it!

Great dialogues! We really feel the intensity of the events through them 👌🏾. I can't help but notice there's a complete change in writing style in the CH 4,5. Style consistency is something you should take into account, I think. But it's your book in the end so this is just my opinion. :)

Very strong first three chapters, then it kinda loses its pace with the information dump and then it goes back on tracks. I still have lots of questions though, and it feels like not fully finished for the volume, perhaps there will be more updates?

What can I say, it's a whole level higher than most novels that I have already read on this site. When I read it, I felt the same vibe as Gosick, a popular anime that I watched years ago. I don't say the story, but the vibe, the atmosphere. And this novel will be a good script for making an anime. Trust me. This is a good novel. Good job.

I'll admit, there were several times I was confused during the first few chapters. The constant pacing shift didn't help either. Though, once I was able to reread it a few times, the story itself is amazing! I would recommend finding a singular pacing structure to follow, including predicates and dialogue structure. Other than that, you have a unique and enthralling idea, please keep up with it!