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Yuuki_Lordes
Yuuki_LordesLv24yr
2020-01-23 07:30

Good job po! I really love the fantasy. Ang galing n'yo po magsulat at maglahad ng kuwento. Maayos ang pagkakasulat at walang jejemon na emoticons. Tamang timpla rin ng action, fantasy, adventure at may halong comedy. I relly love the characters specially the wizard Seiffer. I already have a ship. ^_^ Sana huwag naman gawin ng iba na farming-an itong review mo Ms. Author. Karapat dapat kang bigyan ng matinong reviews. Hindi ito tulad ng iba na nagpapataas lang ng review. Pls. respect her story. Keep on writing po! ^_^

The Mermaid, the Prince and the Wizard (Tagalog)

Mai_Chii
4.7
42 Chs

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Mai_Chii
Mai_ChiiAuthor

Salamat po. 馃槝

4yr
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Zeroror
ZerororLv3

I like the story! Nice setting and character names. Mukhang pahabain din ang isang ito medyo malayo pa kasi at marami pang need ma-reveal. Pero maayos ang pagkakasulat, siguro kung mayroon man error minimal lang. Gusto ko yung style mo Miss Author. Good luck at ipagpatoy mo pa. Maganda ang takbo ng istorya at nakakatuwa. Excited ako sa mga susunod na chapter. I really love the Fantasy-romance na may halong comedy at mukhang may action din 'to, aabangan ko. Nice! 鈾_^

5yr

Laime
LaimeLv3

As of now, good job Author! Keep on writing. Maganda ang takbo ng story alam ko sa iba may off moment pero ayos lang iyon kung ito talaga ang way mo. Maganda ang mga characters at settings love na love ko. Gusto ko rin ang mga magic spells ng wizard, nice. Fantasy-romance ito so expected ko na ang love between the three. Hmmm... may bet na ako para sa mermaid. Well, good luck! Sana may magandang mangyari sa story mo at mapasama ang story mo palagi sa trending.

5yr
AnnaLyn
AnnaLynLv3

Paganda na siya nang paganda! 馃槏 Good luck author! Fantasy na may comedy, romance at cute characters. Good job! 馃槉馃挄馃挄馃挄馃挄 I like the setting.

5yr
Miaka_Saiki
Miaka_SaikiLv3

Bagong reader lang po ako rito. Ang ganda ng story na ito. Maganda ang settings at natutuwa ako sa mga characters. Nababasa ko rin ng maayos ang way niya ng pagsusulat. Good job! Ang kulit ng wizard dito. 馃槀馃槄 Nakakatawa ang story Hindi boring. Fantasy na may romance-comedy. Good luck author keep it up. Abangan ko 'to. 馃檪馃槉

5yr
conielacan
conielacanLv1

First time I read a Fantasy story like this. I must say na may justice naman talaga the way Miss Author tells a story. Sana mabasa rin ng marami. More stories to write. I love it!

4yr
Abbie_Teves
Abbie_TevesLv1

Reveal spoiler

4yr
mirainikki12
mirainikki12Lv2

Nakakabilib ka magkuwento Ms. Author, nice. Ang ganda nito sana tuloy-tuloy na po. Nakakabitin bawat chapter, gusto ko basahin nang tuloy-tuloy. Ang ganda lang ng pagkakakuwento. Akala ko Fantasy-Romance lang siya pero may Action-Adventure palang kasama. Nice! Nice!

4yr
Laime
LaimeLv3

Keep on writing Ms. Author. Maraming story na tulad into ang nararapat bigyan ng maayos na review. Ang masasabi ko lang, ipagpatuloy mo lang Ms. Author maganda talaga ang way mo ng pagsusulat. Lalong gumaganda habang tumatagal at nakakainlab ang mga character mo. 馃槏馃槝馃槝馃グ馃グ馃槏馃槏

4yr
Yuna_Carra
Yuna_CarraLv3

View from a reader. Magaling na story teller si Author. Nadala niya ako sa kakaibang mundo. Good job! Isa yata ito sa ilang story na mayos ang pagkakasulat at walang masasakit sa matang emojis. Hindi rin siya OA at tama lang ang timpla. Gusto ko iyong may halong action and adventure. Hindi lang pala siya Fantas-romance. Nakakatawa rin minsan na hinaluan ng Ms. Author ng humor may kaunting comedy kasi. Over all, recommened ko itong story na 'to. Good job! Keep on writing!

4yr
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