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I like the witing of mister erosire thats why it 5 start But its getiing repetetive like going around the circle For example he got in dangerous situation and he will tell that he can get out but wont or i know how but i cant not yet like he shocasing how op he is in every chapter i mean he is op but not yet while he is doing his thing he not even an aspect that i think is unkillable but acting as such The issue about saving all that he loves he essentially not doing it like for his mother he is saying that its a priority but always delaying it just because the tracker say its fine what i mean is like the mc know that the author wont make it hard for him
One Last Merchant
Erosire
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Thank you for the review, and I will try answer some of your curiosity. There are key figures that the MC has to saved in order to alter the future, and his mother takes priority. However, as long as she is still alive in any state, it is acceptable to him. As the new timeline is different than he knows, thus he is being cautious, as revealing too much will get attentions from those he doesn't want attention yet (cause he cannot defend himself against them). Also, one of the Ruler is dead regardless if time got rewinded, thus, the other Rulers know something is up. Max (the Aspect of Time) at this moment in the story cannot truly rewind time completely. Even if he did, other Aspects and Primordials would still remember the previous timeline. There are alot of moving parts in this story, but it will get there eventually. Just sit back and enjoy. Thank you again for the review ;)