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ZababuuLv123yr
2021-03-20 00:17

Writing quality-5 Updating stability-5 Story development-3.5 Character design-2 World Background-5 Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.

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Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it.  As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old).  Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinates  or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him. Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one. The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world. TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!

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