Review Detail of RichBoyWinston in Pokemon In Cultivation World

Hi, you probably heard "shameless author here" countless times already, so let's skip that. I already had the idea of putting Pokemon in a cultivation world, but after reading a certain novel, that spark turned into a fire. I can assure you my grammar is readable, though there are some grammatical errors here and there. If you guys have any suggestions or questions, just reply to this review here. Goodbye :D