Review Detail of Crosslynn in The birth of a Saiyan God(dropped-up for adoption)
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Its looking great so far š it's great im hoping he doesn't get a harem because we all know that's the one thing that angers readers/me I harems and how the MC interacts with these people
The birth of a Saiyan God(dropped-up for adoption)
Harbinger9901
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if you make a new character for his girlfriend, make sure he doesn't have a power that surpasses the main character without any reason, since I remember a novel that he did and honestly he didn't have a good plot, because literally a human (woman) appeared that had a power of more than 100,000 for no reason
Harbinger9901:Hi Crosslynn, I've been thinking about a romantic interest for a MC but I don't know who yet, I could make a new character or I could steal one from someone else. Bulma or chi-chi maybe? Guess we will find out soon š
I didn't plan to have a human with that much battle power lol most humans only had 2 or so I think but hey what about Android 18 š¤
The_Immortal_King:if you make a new character for his girlfriend, make sure he doesn't have a power that surpasses the main character without any reason, since I remember a novel that he did and honestly he didn't have a good plot, because literally a human (woman) appeared that had a power of more than 100,000 for no reason
Harbinger9901:I didn't plan to have a human with that much battle power lol most humans only had 2 or so I think but hey what about Android 18 š¤
Itād be better to go with tights if your gonna go that route or android 21 even kale an caulifa all depends who you want to take on journey with you. That way you donāt have time patrol after you although fighting xeno goku an vegeta would be interesting
Harbinger9901:Hi Crosslynn, I've been thinking about a romantic interest for a MC but I don't know who yet, I could make a new character or I could steal one from someone else. Bulma or chi-chi maybe? Guess we will find out soon š
Iāve made plans to when Adam will end up in a conflict to either stay a good guy or just screw everything to get to his goal of going home what I mean is something is gonna happen and I donāt know if Iāll keep Adam happy and all or Iāll make his rage from the event change him to the core Iāll still give him a romantic relationship either way if he stays good he will still care about her if he turns neutral evil he will still care for her and by neutral evil I mean he will do anything for his goals for example killing someone that was good but if he could do it without killing him he would choose that first
DragonGodSmith3000:Itād be better to go with tights if your gonna go that route or android 21 even kale an caulifa all depends who you want to take on journey with you. That way you donāt have time patrol after you although fighting xeno goku an vegeta would be interesting
Harbinger9901:Iāve made plans to when Adam will end up in a conflict to either stay a good guy or just screw everything to get to his goal of going home what I mean is something is gonna happen and I donāt know if Iāll keep Adam happy and all or Iāll make his rage from the event change him to the core Iāll still give him a romantic relationship either way if he stays good he will still care about her if he turns neutral evil he will still care for her and by neutral evil I mean he will do anything for his goals for example killing someone that was good but if he could do it without killing him he would choose that first
DragonGodSmith3000:Itād be better to go with tights if your gonna go that route or android 21 even kale an caulifa all depends who you want to take on journey with you. That way you donāt have time patrol after you although fighting xeno goku an vegeta would be interesting