Review Detail of Nr_Yet1208 in Lost in Time; Battlefront
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Interesting concept. The story was good, the writing could be better. Some sentences struck me odd. Some dialogues were confusing but I'm sure they can be easily fixed with editing. The author seems to love his story and writing, so I'm sure he'll fix everything by the time you're reading this.
Lost in Time; Battlefront
KayyRo
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Yeah, I honestly struggled with the concept of the story at the start and haven't gone back to fix something things. I have been planning to redo a few chapters at the start and go back and fix some typos. (I do a lot on my phone so I don't always catch things like I would on my laptop).Thanks for the review.