Review Detail of MorningStarsfather in Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?

Except for when he is conflicted, indecisive, moralistic , preachy and philosophical for 2 chapters at a time, several times. It could be chalked up to a conflicted personality, but having the same "am I good or bad?" mental argument over and over crossed the boundary of character development to be annoying. This MC loves to internally monologue, A LOT. I'm sure that a certain amount is necessary for a good narrative, but the actual story is really good, once the action starts. Also, beware of carriage rides. his introspection makes the journey much, much longer.