12:10 AM ET, 5/28/2023 in loving memory of a great woman and the best grandma a Vietnamese kid can ask for. I love you grandma and I'll miss you, alot! Your milk coffee, the breakfast you made me, the times you were there when I needed you most. My life was richer and so much happier because I was lucky enough to be born your grandson. I know I'm not good at talking and I know I haven't always been the best but wherever you are I hope you know that I love you with all of my heart.

Still amazing as ever we got story development that's a 10 and everything you can want from a MC he's cold, calculative, manipulative, ruthless. 10 out of 10

love the story so far, I really want to see what happens. I like stories like this were they fight against there fate even better when it's a game character. hope to see more, keep up the good work

The plot is interesting, but the story is so hard to read. How do I say it. The way the author writes makes me dislike every single character. The author needs to improve his story telling.

I really like how you portray each character in this novel. Looking forward to some romance between the two and pls dont make it a harem style, I personally dont like it hehe, even a slowromance as they were just kids but still. Anyways, this book looks promising and I'll wait for the next update, author-san!

A really good novel. I liked the story and most of the characters 🙂. Markus is a really likeable character to me. I enjoyed reading this, was a bit sad when completed reading all the chapters there. I look forward to more chapters. I'm grateful for the daily chapters

I'll be completely honest. The story is quite good, but it's extremely hard to read. There are next to no comma usage and the author continues a sentence for an entire paragraph without using a period. If you don't mind this, then go ahead and read this.

A hidden gem good character development and world building. The one problem is the chapters are stupid expensive it’s like 37 coins for 1 chapter. That is stupid expensive you’d have to spend like $30 or 2,000 coins to read from chapters 42-127.

(Sry but this is my first review so no flame pls) Writing Quality 5/5 -No major noticeable grammar errors, sentences flow nicely and the entire progression doesn't feel like a headache to read, there might be some errors but small enough to not really care about Stability of Updates 3/5 -I started reading this about a month ago and there have only been 2 updates so far and looking at the previous chapter updates it seems the author only writes when he has time so going into this you should realize there might only be 2 chapters one month and 10 the next its not really stable and depends on the authors time which in no way is bad but you should realize it isn't gonna be consistently updated. Story 5/5 -So far the plot hasn't gone that far its still kinda early game, but from what I've read I liked it. Volume 1 is honestly amazing, there are no noticeable things that tilted me. Volume 2 wasn't as good as 1 but that has to mainly have to do with characters but the overall plot direction and how it's progressing is still strong so no real problems. Characters 4/5 -Main character is exactly as you see in the tags he's cold, calculative, and manipulative. He also has the feel of a real person a little in the sense of how he feels alone which I could personally relate to some of his thoughts, The only real thing I can nitpick at is how in volume 2 he seems softer mainly due to the girl he butlering for. (IDK if butlering is a word but whatever) Side characters-Most are forgettable no real characters that I care for other than the MC and maybe the girl he's watching over, but that mainly has to do with short chapters and not enough time to get to know them but most of them I can't even remember. Worldbuilding 4/5 -the only reason it isn't 5 is that the plot is still in the early game so we dont know the whole world or have a grand picture so there is a possibility to mess up, but overall I'm really interested and I wanna know what's around and build a picture of it in my mind. Overall I think this is a solid read and you should read it only real downside is the update frequency, but I loved it it also gave me some My Death Flags Show No Sign of Ending and a little bit of The Villainous Daughter’s Butler I Raised Her to be Very Cute.