Review Detail of BaeVida in The Depra King
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What can I say... Nice work. Writing quality check✅ Character design check ✅ World background check ✅ Story Development check ✅ Love your writing quality, just a few missing word sometimes in a sentence but other than that it is spectacular, because it doesn't interrupt the flow of your reading. I mean particularly I am not one for long chapters but I almost didn't notice while I was reading. You gave a good flow of your story with the way you write, narrate and all. You did some show not tell, bringing to life your narration. I particularly could relate to our mc. In the first chapter author gave us a bot of a depressing situation to a hope filled one and plunged us back to the bitter truth, a bitter wish coming true. And then the suspense at the end... Leaving u yearning for d next. Nice work. Keep it up.
The Depra King
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Glad you enjoy it so much. And don't worry, the mystery will remain for a long time come lol. I normally reread my chapters before releasing them, but I've been lazy, but I'll reread it and catch them sometime. I also skip words because my brain works faster than my fingers, so if I don't read what I'm writing, mistakes like that happen. Also, I like writing long chapters, and flow is very important to me, so when I write, I always try to make sure it flows well. Anyway, can't wait for you continue on our Journey with our Depra King, and I'm gonna put this in the synopsis after I finish writing this, but since this is the Hidden Power Saga, they do indeed have abilities that I keep secret from the reader until the end. You'll find out what Depra's ability is at the end (Kinda), along with Lachesis, Erebus, Eros, Aether, Hemera, and Necessitas (and man is it a pain to spell out that name).
BaeVida:I would. Keep it up, but wait a minute... Suspense till the end.... Authurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 😤😤😤