I loved this novel. The plot of the love story is unique with past and present mixed. Reincarnation and world of fantasy is combined in a beautiful way. So my critique for this novel is (according to how I felt) *The story needs chance for character development of characters other than the main characters. *Story needs a strong villains to display a strong MC. (I do think she has just not entered yet, but I do feel like something is missing without a strong villainous character) *The space can be used in more ways (I hope to see it being used in more ways. ) *Like most readers I would like to to see more interaction and romance between lead roles For now that's what my opinion. Thank you so much for writing this novel , I really really like it .
Melodia
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