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Author MiZa - you are a fantastic story teller with great historical details and interesting character developments. I don’t usually read fantasy romance genre but I couldn’t put your book down. This is a truly hidden gem that has a lot mystery and sweet romance. Your FL and ML are too sweet- well I was pretty sure who I think the ML is then I look at your book title but I will still keep my prince as the ML even though, he is a bit foolish but he is a sweetie in my books. I can’t for more updates and like the other reviewers indicate, it does keep us on the edge of our seats. I found the beginning chapters a little confusing when she was traveling with her fiancée entourage and running into the Cordealius but after reading- I got the gist of it. Your writing improves as the story progresses so while I wait for more future chapters, I will check out your other book. As a suggestion, you might want to reword your story summary to be more concise to attract more readers. Great job! Thanks again

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The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

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Hello! Thank you so much for your heartwarming review! Haha the ML is who you think it is.😉 I appreciate your advice, sometimes we writers become blind to our flaws. And, I'd love to hear how you'd reword the summary. I'm lame at summaries!😢 Thank you, and lots of love! 🤞🤞🤞