Wow! There are only 5 chapters, but so much has happened. The story is developing very well. Also, every single character introduced so far has a distinct personality. Ryujin, Aera, Jaein. I can already tell the type of character they are despite so little interactions, which is amazing. With so few chapters, the world has not been fully explained yet, but there are details added in such as good looks and enrollment in a prestigious university being valued. The only thing I could criticize would be the grammar. Some of the sentences don't mix well, and there are a few misplaced words here and there. However, if you fix that, I believe the story has no issues. It has good characters and solid plot development!
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