There are only three chapters as of writing this review. In the beginning, I had a smooth reading experience and it contains a good writing style which is a good way to catch a reader's attention I think. However, I noticed that the story became interesting for me when I reached chapter 3 which the main characters met. Another story with a CEO but a gamer at least. I imagined your story as Korean dramas I've watched although I read the synopsis and it says that the male lead will turn into a ghost. (Yeah, I've forgotten to read the synopsis first before the story XD) I think this story will turn out great and the current chapters are just starting. Another thing, it'll bring more readers if the next few chapters are published since the next events are intriguing! That's all goodluck author!
ShinSungmi
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