There is a lot of potential for this story, but the quality of writing detracts so much from the overall novel it becomes almost unreadable. - Switching between past and present tense, grammar and punctuation errors abound. - The sentence structure itself in many paragraphs is broken or reversed. This has the working of a great novel, but it needs some love and care - an editor could make this novel so much better. Even if the author put it into word and grammarly it could make a huge difference.
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