Review Detail of slothyhuman in Chronicles Of The Shura Clan

Ignore mis-pelled words, i wrote this quickly on a phone.

I stopped reading when you said you only read until chapter 3

I stopped at chapter 3 bc i had an anuerism reading the horrible grammar and cliche tropes

At the beginning, the author is basically using that time to describe everything that is essential to the story so when he gets to the real plot, we won’t get confused. I do admit that there was tons of grammars, but people who ignore those and understand what the author is trying to say will not regret reading this novel. The more you read, the more exciting it becomes, especially the time skips.

Aight, i respect that. Mainly wrote this for others like me who cant continue reading stories with bad grammar even if its a good story. And i think its hard for me and others that feel the same way because english is my first language and that makes it nigh impossible to ignore the errors.

Good god yes. There are several stories i know that are good, but the grammar is so atrocious i can't get past the second paragraph.

Your review has many grammatical errors even tho thats what you don’t like about the novel not only that but you can’t criticize the novel other than grammatical errors because you only read 3 chapters smh

Forgive me for my grammatical errors. Im not an expert at phone typing. Still doesnt mean i cant point out how no one. And i mean no one pointed out the grammatical errors of thr novel that made it impossible to read. Im not trying tk start a fight or anything. As i stated in my post it was mainly to inform those like me who cant read novels due to grammar. I even said it may have a good story but from what i read, it made it impossible for me to get to that point

Read your review first half is talking **** about a novel u have barely even read

Also who gives a review after 3 chapters fr you can’t make a accurate well written review when you only read 3 chapters

Read the end of my review where i said go ahead and try it dumb ****

I wouldn't call myself a bot. 🤷‍♂️

I’ve been raised to not complain “there’s a lot of grammar mistakes” DEAL WITH IT no one is a perfect

Shut the fck up you piece of elephant manure. Critics exist to help the author improve. If you are not happy with the critics , go and drink a rat poison. Its a better drink than water for you. If the book is trash then its trash..who the fck do u think you are. Not everyone born with clogged brain like you. Donald trump wouldve banned such a grammarly broken book. Ima put my dick into your fcken mouth so that you can stfu.

Sounds pretty sugar gay

You know, I doubt each author ✍️ on Web Novel has an editor on call every day of the week, or when they come up with a new page every second day or so. I will not say a chapter, because the so called chapters are too short from a proper book. They “do not” have a big publishing house which backs them up, either with huge check before the book goes on print or world wide book sales commissions, every six months or so. Still, no matter how much an Author proves reads the book, there is always mistakes.. Thus, here is where the “Professional EDITOR” comes in, they are “NOT” Authors! Plus, reading three pages from any web novel, DOES NOT give you the rights the critizise the book, come back after you have read just over 50 thousand words, then that gives you the rights to write what you think of the novel, not the bloody first page, let alone the thrid. Not to mention, many English words a wrtten completly differnt from the American, thus here we come with asumed mistakes as well. The only Author in the world, whom never needed an editor was Tolkien, this is a proven fact! Yes, I saw written mistakes as well, here and there, but who gives a dam.

you were right about the fake reviews, just look at all those rabid fans

and if the author doesn't find any mistakes, there's a thing such as asking his readers and INTERACTING with them, e.g. a discord server. There are lots of ways to correct the mistakes without a professional proof-reader.