Review Detail of Irappu in The Oracle Paths
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This is no different than those old drama shows that fabricate intricate scenarios just to sustain drama and captivate the audience, keeping them on edge. Also, the dungeon Nexus isn't comparable to Jake losing four years of progression, especially when you consider how much he achieved in just one year. Another thing: why does every character who plays an antagonistic role seem infinitely smarter and more resourceful than the characters we're meant to root for? By now, why is Jake still the same naive, clumsy character he was at the beginning of the story? If the average person went through what Jake has experienced, they would have transformed, becoming almost unrecognizable. Yet somehow, Jake remains stagnant even after 1000+ chapters, with no character development. The same recurring drama, unresolved issues that just keep piling up one after the other. The only reason I continue reading this novel is because of the captivating world and unique powers. Everything else – from progression to logic to character depth – is abysmal. It feels like I'm watching that subpar show, 'Desperate Housewives.' It baffles me how a story can span 1000+ chapters with so little advancement. At this point, being able to write so much filler can be seen as a talent in itself, not to mention the excruciatingly slow release schedule.
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Thank you for your review. I admit I'm struggling to grasp exactly what you're getting at and what you're criticizing about my novel, especially after over 1,000 chapters. No character growth? Maybe I'm biased as the author, but seriously? Are we even reading the same story? Most reviews and discussions on Discord suggest his transformation is quite drastic on every level. Traits you might not like, such as his cynicism or pettiness, are part of his character. They're not going away. If you're referring to his romantic relationship/s, they develop slowly, but romance was never the main focus. There are plenty of other web novels out there that might better cater to that interest. You also mentioned that it often feels like the antagonists are smarter than the hero, as if he's always one step behind, merely reacting. But that's intentional. The four lost years you mentioned couldn't have been anticipated unless he became completely paranoid and refused to leave his home. I'm always amazed by how some readers dislike any situation where the main character faces challenges, whether it's betrayal, unexpected twists, or even legitimate defeats. I recently read "Shadow Slave" (the site's top pick, right?) and it receives similar criticisms, yet I loved it. As for your comparison to "Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse", that comparison speaks volumes about your preferences. They're vastly different stories with differing metrics. I can tell you're not a webnovel writer, because if you were, you'd understand that many factors beyond quality influence views and profitability. First and foremost: release rate. I have a full-time job in the real world. Writing is just a hobby. Yes, it's paid, but it's supplementary income. I live in an expensive country, and the income from TOP would barely sustain me above the minimum wage, which is a no-go. So, as it doesn't earn enough to live on, I can't leave my actual job. Once readers (many of whom use pirate sites) understand this, fewer authors will abandon their stories. We're neither slaves nor volunteers. Regarding "Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse", in terms of regular privilege readers (those truly committed to supporting us financially), we're similar, with 300-500 privilege readers monthly. But with my lower release rate (6-7 chapters per week vs. 14+), I make fewer daily subscriptions. So, I earn less (around 30-50% less due to this factor alone), which drops my rankings in Trending, Power, and Golden Ticket (since a reader has to spend 500 coins to earn a golden ticket). This results in lower visibility and credibility, but also, I rarely participate in the Win Win Event (since I don't always publish 1,500 words a day, I'm disqualified). This is the only guaranteed way to get featured spots like banners. That's significant visibility I'm missing. Lastly, the first few chapters are crucial in grabbing reader attention, and I admit the first volume needs work for various reasons.
I forgot to mention that "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" was released around the same time as this novel. "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" is currently on chapter 2481, whereas this novel is only at chapter 1055 — less than half. And the progression in this story isn't even comparable to the advancement we see in the first 100 chapters of "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse." If there's going to be so much filler and drama, there should at least be volume, but even that is lacking.
It's also ranked #12 in the 'Originals' Power Ranking and has almost four times the views. Even when you account for the larger chapter count, it still boasts double the views per chapter.
Irappu:I forgot to mention that "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" was released around the same time as this novel. "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" is currently on chapter 2481, whereas this novel is only at chapter 1055 — less than half. And the progression in this story isn't even comparable to the advancement we see in the first 100 chapters of "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse." If there's going to be so much filler and drama, there should at least be volume, but even that is lacking.
Since it doesn’t look like you’ll pick blood legacy anytime soon, I just wanted to ask; what is the mystery item in the box?
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Did the author reply? Because all I see is "The content has been deleted". Did he delete the comment?
Javon_Nixon:Since it doesn’t look like you’ll pick blood legacy anytime soon, I just wanted to ask; what is the mystery item in the box?
Irappu:Did the author reply? Because all I see is "The content has been deleted". Did he delete the comment?
Thank you for your lengthy response to my review. While I appreciate the effort to explain your perspective, it doesn't change the glaring issues I've pointed out in your novel. Character Growth: Let's be clear: Jake's character is stagnant. Over 1,000 chapters in, and he's still the same naive, clumsy individual from the start. Your defense of his "traits" doesn't excuse the lack of development. A character can retain core traits while still evolving, and Jake simply hasn't. Antagonists vs. Protagonists: It's one thing to have a protagonist face challenges; it's another to make him perpetually outwitted by every antagonist he encounters. It's not about disliking challenges; it's about the protagonist appearing inept chapter after chapter. Comparison with "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse": The comparison stands. While your novel drags on with filler content, "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" has managed to deliver twice the content with more meaningful progression. It's not just about quantity; it's about quality and pacing. Release Rate and Rankings: While I understand the challenges of balancing a job with writing, it's not the reader's concern. If you're going to write, especially a paid webnovel, then you should be prepared to deliver. Using your job as an excuse for slow releases and subpar content is unprofessional. Story Progression: Your novel feels like a never-ending cycle of drama with little to no resolution. It's like watching a soap opera where the plot never advances. The unique world and powers you've introduced are overshadowed by the repetitive drama and lack of character depth. In short, your response, while detailed, doesn't address the core issues of your novel. Instead of being defensive, perhaps consider the feedback and improve. Until then, your novel remains a masterclass in how to stretch out a story with minimal progression.
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Apparently he replied, but maybe deleted the comment as it show's in my Notifications. However you can see the reply if you go to his profile as I just found out.
Javon_Nixon:No
I came back for my yearly checking of this novels reviews to check how some people have waken up, i stopped reading at about chapter 600s i got tired of the author forcing the narrative and honestly him forcing the mc to have a relationship with ruby after people made a ruckus in the comments about how she sucks and he still ended up going with it, I dont know how u managed to read 1k chapters of this you have a mind of steel for sure.
