I read up to the free chapters of this series and I.jusy have to day the story just wasnt interesting enough to keep me going. while reading I.just felt like I wanted something to happen and when it did happen it didnt feel grand and spectacular like other stories. the system is rarely used in my opinion which good be a good point but wasn't for me. the story is a little slow placed. the only thing that is good about this is the writing quality but to be honest for me that just made it even more.borng. would not.reccomend for anyone who's looking for something exciting or new.
Arkinslize
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LIKENo problem, there' s something for everyone. I grew up with English literature, not Webnovels, so I understand that my style is not for everyone here. If I had to give a Webnovel of reference corresponding to my tastes it would be Lord of the Mysteries and many people don't like this novel for the same problem of slow pace. (and many agree that it's the best webnovel on the site) I just want to point out that it takes time to build a good story. I never intended to make a quick return on the first hundred chapters like some authors on the platform. Each chapter has its purpose and the best is yet to come. No story with a fast pace, plot holes and clichés has ever caught my attention beyond two hundred chapters for a good reason. It runs out of steam sooner or later. Now to say that my story has nothing new or original, I totally disagree, since avoiding all common clichés and introducing a unique concept was my priority when writing this story. At least, the review seems legit, but I haven't received any review below 3 stars in 7 months and now 2 in three days with the same rating (and the second from a low level account) so I'm quite wary. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
Arkinslize:No problem, there' s something for everyone. I grew up with English literature, not Webnovels, so I understand that my style is not for everyone here. If I had to give a Webnovel of reference corresponding to my tastes it would be Lord of the Mysteries and many people don't like this novel for the same problem of slow pace. (and many agree that it's the best webnovel on the site) I just want to point out that it takes time to build a good story. I never intended to make a quick return on the first hundred chapters like some authors on the platform. Each chapter has its purpose and the best is yet to come. No story with a fast pace, plot holes and clichés has ever caught my attention beyond two hundred chapters for a good reason. It runs out of steam sooner or later. Now to say that my story has nothing new or original, I totally disagree, since avoiding all common clichés and introducing a unique concept was my priority when writing this story. At least, the review seems legit, but I haven't received any review below 3 stars in 7 months and now 2 in three days with the same rating (and the second from a low level account) so I'm quite wary. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.