👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎boring garbage dosent make sense at all no charecter development at all just straight up garbage anyone who gave this a positive review is a bot or stupid.
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You have any suggestions then? If you can think of ways how you could have wrote it better, please enlighten me :D . Also, thanks for your honest review, but please refrain from calling others stupid because they don’t share the same opinion as you~
The story is all over the place time skips and bad grammar your plot is good but you need a professional translator and to slow it down it feels rushed.
grammar is ****? Damm... I actually put in a lot of effort at the time to make the grammar as good as I can... I returned like yesterday... and now I am making even more mistakes XD... plz don’t read the latest 4 chapters if you get triggered by the grammars easily. + sorry for the rush thing... but this whole story is rushed since it is a remake for another story that I did a long time ago... A lot of people actually want me to write another story, this is why I am trying to finish this one as fast as possible, while giving at as much respect as I can... so yeah... any suggestion (other than the translation and the rush thing... because I can’t hire an editor since I do this for free < . < sry)
LaurentCross:The story is all over the place time skips and bad grammar your plot is good but you need a professional translator and to slow it down it feels rushed.
Just slow it down and everything will be better honestly I know you're trying with the grammar but you really need to take your time honestly I know you want to get through this novel and write another but still slow it down and edit a bit more and you should be great.
I will try my best
LaurentCross:Just slow it down and everything will be better honestly I know you're trying with the grammar but you really need to take your time honestly I know you want to get through this novel and write another but still slow it down and edit a bit more and you should be great.
RUN ON SENTENCE
LaurentCross:Just slow it down and everything will be better honestly I know you're trying with the grammar but you really need to take your time honestly I know you want to get through this novel and write another but still slow it down and edit a bit more and you should be great.
