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2020-02-12 21:22

The story is a great premise but the dialogue and characters could use some work and an editor is most definitely needed. I hope the author can keep up the good work and keep improving!

The apocalyptic mother and her struggles

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4.8
53 Chs

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ZeljkaZZ
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The story is bit different than most of apocalyptic stories out there. Thanks for good read. Get healthy and have fun writing. ;) *.* + -.- =@.@ I wish you to succeed to write the novel the way you want. Freely

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benedict_quijano
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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dark_midnightlight
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Really find the story interesting the background story is really thought through. The character design is also amazing. I do really recommend this story.

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lonnashad
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Reveal spoiler

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JennyS
JennySLv5

I like it that it has bit different view of possible zombie novels. There is Ml that is actually someone smart and rich and uses both treats to save humanity. Waiting to see more...

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Hi, sorry to trouble you again, I am still waiting for your reply, if you are interested in, we can further discuss our cooperation, thank you.

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